"i am all alone again
coz no one can feel my pain...."
kindly don make fun of it
just wanna sincere comments n advices
thankss!!
2007-06-03 00:35:39 · 5 answers · asked by student of honorZ 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
"...quote the Raven....Nevermore...!"
2007-06-03 00:43:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I am alone again because my pain is too great to share with another
So often I have tried to connect only to push those I love away
In loneliness I find that I am in love
In love with my pain
I am alone no more
"quote the raven....Nevermore"
2007-06-03 02:49:15 · answer #2 · answered by John Rambo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not a poem. Also, when you write for the general public, you need to use standard spelling. For example:
coz=because
don=do not
wanna=want
n=and
advices=advice
2007-06-03 03:41:46 · answer #3 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do you really have to write "coz"?
Apart from this, no, it's not good, I am afraid. I am not making fun of it, just giving you my opinion. It's a bit short too, I mean, there is not much to comment on. It's just a short sentence.
2007-06-03 03:23:52 · answer #4 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Jaane tu ya jaane na!!<3<3 Lovely song..
2016-05-20 00:06:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋