im writing a persuasive essay about school,
my topic is "more free time "
i would like some ideas of how to start my paragraph
the introduction, hook
also if u dont mind, give me some reasons to have more free time and explain
thanks:)
2007-06-02 17:47:22 · 11 answers · asked by ccknx 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
ppl are not actually answering wat i ask for...and to be more clearly
the topic is:"MORE FREE TIME AT SCHOOL"
just give me some ideas....why u ppl be so mean for
2007-06-02 18:15:34 · update #1
Make it personal and emotional.
For example:
"It's 2am. My eyes in the mirror are red, with dark circles underneath. I'm exhausted. I have to keep reminding myself what I'm working on. Did I procrastinate too much? I wish. Band practice after school. Chores at home. Help my little sister with her homework because Mom's too tired and Dad's still at work. Set the table for dinner. Wash up while Mom gives my sister a bath. Math homework. Practice the flute for an hour. Research that essay about ancient Rome. Finally my persuasive essay. What was my topic? Oh yeah. Why we need more free time."
Have fun!
2007-06-02 17:59:55 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
well as a backing up reason. usually by the last or last 2periods children are worn out and not taking in much in those classes. its a waste of time to even have them there. being taught 7-8 different subjects a day for what -7hours? is too much.
also i dont understand why kids lifes have to be defined by school. like theres nuthing else they could be doing. its like 75% of their lifes until they graudate. too much time in school,not enough time just living i say
2007-06-02 17:54:19 · answer #2 · answered by liltammy1988 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Today it is hard for people to find free time. As we pursue academic studies and then careers. The hope of this essay is to try to show the reader the need for a balance of adult goals and free time.
"Then just leave the rest blank"! ;-p
2007-06-02 17:58:16 · answer #3 · answered by Snaglefritz 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Start off by asking the question "What would you do if you had more free time?"
Would you spend that extra time with your family? Traveling? Doing volunteer work?
Or would you waste it watching TV? ETC.
2007-06-02 17:56:11 · answer #4 · answered by ♨ Wisper ► 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It you take the average between today's weather and what the weather is supposed to be like at this time of the year, you have an 80% chance of forecasting tomorrow's weather accurately.
2016-05-19 22:45:59 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you meaning more free time for school or more free time away from school?
2007-06-02 17:52:54 · answer #6 · answered by char__c is a good cooker 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
List the topics you are going to talk about and I can help you more . . .
2007-06-02 17:50:32 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Unless you got this assignment today, you have already wasted much free time, perhaps you don't really need more.
2007-06-02 17:50:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
turn it into a persuasive story, thats what i did, A+
2007-06-02 17:50:21 · answer #9 · answered by hbf2828 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really want to help, but I really think you should do this on your own, your grade should reflect YOUR abilities and ideas.
2007-06-02 17:50:32 · answer #10 · answered by dandmeveritt 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋