Persuasive Essay Writing:
some of the topics that are related to school are (elementary):
*vending machines at school
*better cafeteria food
*bigger library
*computer lab at school
*school starting/ending at a later time
*more field trips
*have more free time
*longer recess and/or lunch
please give me some ideas and 3 reason why they should........................
i would also need a hook....thank you
2007-06-02 08:15:33 · 4 answers · asked by ccknx 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Primary & Secondary Education
I would do "have more free time". Firstly, this makes school more entertaining and allows you to socialize with others and feel as if you have *some* choice in what you do at school. School shouldn't be 100% dreaded, and free time gives it a little extra "flavor". Secondly, this helps you to stay focused and put more energy into your studies and school work/classes. If you are working working working, you will get burnt out, but free time allows you to unwind and then focus on your work when you have to. Thirdly, more free time allows you to feel more responsible and in control, thus making you feel more grown up and it allows you to make a decision how you want to spend it. You can choose to spend it getting ahead, or you can waste it by fooling around; either way, this puts you in control of a piece of your academic day and can give you a sense of accomplishment.
2007-06-02 08:33:26 · answer #1 · answered by Chriss 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You've waited until the last minute and now you don't want help, you want someone to do the work for you! I suggest that you choose something you really believe in and answer the questions for yourself. I find it impossible to believe that you don't care enough about any of these topics to find 3 reasons why they should do whatever it is you want them to do. For example, suppose you would like to have more field trips. You would start out by saying that field trips are important to students and they could use more of them Then, you would give the reasons. Think about this for any of the above subjects.
2007-06-02 08:31:15 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i would use the more field trips since u can write more. Start the intro like this- How would anyone feel if they were couped up inside everyday? We need to more field trips to expand our education,(1st paragraph) get some fresh air(2nd paragraph, and experience first hand what we learn in school(3rd paraghraph). Then for the conclusion sum up all the points u made.
2007-06-02 08:25:27 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
pick have more free time, lets see , you can say:
to make * your school * a better environment i believe us students need more free time. we do work all day, and i think we deserve a break once in a while! having a break will help student run and maybe they wont be as hipe in class. also you can say something like a break wont make the students feel like they are in jail , give us a chance to stretch our legs and maybe the problem of kids running around in class wont exist. lol i wish we could express our minds like this , I'm in the 9th grade and we go to school from 8 am until 3:30 pm and its working non stop . anyways good luck and if u need more ideas email me
2007-06-02 08:32:05 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋