Behind the misty waterfalls,
Lies and angel with white wings,
Her lover's name she sadly calls,
What a sad and sorrowful song she sings!
Cause her lover left her and went away,
And here the angel lies till this day!
[any poem that is mine i say so,this one is mine other poems were given to me by friends,just so you all know!]
2007-06-02 07:39:05 · 25 answers · asked by ....FED UP............ 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
so far sweetie everyone that likes it gets a thumbs down- I can't understand why, I think it's pretty good-So there Give me a Thumbs Down too, if it makes ya feel better hehe!!Whoever you are!! It doesn't change a thing!!It's still good.
2007-06-02 07:47:03 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Hey! this flows really well. One thing I don't like is the "!" at the ends of some sentences. It's kind of a sad poem and the !! don't fit it. It's like TILL THIS DAY!!! or at least, thats how i read it, and I don't think thats the feeling you want.
2007-06-02 07:44:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
I heard about this woman in France who locked herself in her bathroom by accident and she was in there 20 days before they checked on her. The whole time she was tapping on the pipes to signal someone. Well they got a petition going about the dreadful noise, and when the woman got back from the hospital, she was asked to sign it. Maybe a woodpecker wants to tell us something.
2016-04-01 11:52:00 · answer #3 · answered by Regenna 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds really nice. I like the flow of it... Try submitting it to poetry.com!
Keep up the good work on the poetry!
2007-06-02 07:42:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I keep telling you Goddess you have to really think about getting some of them published.Let more people enjoy them...not just us.
A star from me to you.
2007-06-02 08:39:56 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
That is really beautiful.
Lynne is right you should get some published if you have any more of this standard. x
2007-06-02 08:46:27 · answer #6 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Just another fine deliverance.
Bravo.
2007-06-02 08:52:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like that poem
2007-06-02 07:47:14 · answer #8 · answered by ωнєη уσυ ѕмιℓє уσυ мαкє мє ѕмιℓє 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
sad yet so beautiful and true
2007-06-02 08:42:00 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
i like ur poems
2007-06-02 07:41:55 · answer #10 · answered by Mag 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋