Who's your daddy...?
I'm the man...!
Have a lovely day :-)
2007-06-01 07:04:44 · 24 answers · asked by Hector of Troy 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Give a Star so Everybody can have a lovely day...! :-)
2007-06-01 07:16:59 · update #1
You made me laugh, and I gotta say it was effective....look how many responses you got. go you!!
It's like a cop talking to a lost kid.
2007-06-07 11:30:36 · answer #1 · answered by Lukas S 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If it's a comment on todays pop art which is lazy and cliche then you nailed it. If you're getting to the point that you are an ego maniac, then you nailed it.
If you wanted to give an homage to Pedro martinez, Tiger Woods, and Mic Foley, you nailed the hell out of it.
If you expect to make a living with words...
2007-06-01 10:26:22 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Daddy?
2007-06-01 07:35:02 · answer #3 · answered by bigfurness 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I was having a lovely day until I read it.It is far too long.Shorten it by 5 or 6 words and it would be perfect.
2007-06-01 07:21:24 · answer #4 · answered by gerald8018 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
your use of language and punctuation is secondary only to Pound himself. furthermore, in two short lines, you have managed to introduce themes (of longing, questioning one's existence, and belief in the power of humanity) that speak of a remarkable and intimate familiarity with the human psyche. in short, the poem's distillation of context into it's pure essence is, frankly, breathtaking.
2007-06-01 08:06:27 · answer #5 · answered by malfouka 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Sorry but I'm not a fan. You have a lovely day too.
2007-06-07 01:34:19 · answer #6 · answered by DJ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Brilliant! True genius!
2007-06-08 05:54:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Talk about funky! Ur fab!!! Xx
2007-06-02 04:23:09 · answer #8 · answered by sandrina 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i would give up your day job you"ll earn a fortune,GREAT talent
2007-06-07 02:47:35 · answer #9 · answered by blueendred 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats very good
you must have spent hours on writing it
2007-06-04 13:33:27 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋