yesterday i thought of this poem:.
knocking banging memories
i wish it never was
my ma is gone
and so am i
and if it is im sure to die
i close my eyes and i see death
i open and its here
my tears they've fallen
my beatings they've stung
my screams they've echoed
my life?
its gone
(its based on the feelings of a girl called duzzana who's life was replayed by me in a play called i never saw another buterfly, all about the holocoust, Duzzana went to terrazin when she was 4 she died when she was 11.)
what do you think of my poem?
2007-05-31 22:58:41 · 5 answers · asked by Applecrumble 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
im not normally the kind of girl to wright poems like this
2007-05-31 23:09:21 · update #1
Wow sweetheart, I really loved it yes it is sad. But it was sweet as well,very touching to my heart. Do you have any more? Like love poems, I would love to read them.
2007-06-01 00:24:36 · answer #1 · answered by blueyedreamer67 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very powerful
2007-06-01 07:13:18 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good it come straight from your true feelings, but l do hope you feel better soon
2007-06-01 06:04:40 · answer #3 · answered by catsclaw 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Boring...
2007-06-01 06:06:13 · answer #4 · answered by Jela 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
condolence..
nah.. btw, nice..
2007-06-01 06:05:15 · answer #5 · answered by ô,ô 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋