We come On
We come on
To be heard
We come on
To be assured
We come on
To find a way
We come on
To have our say
People need validation
Because life’s full
Of confusion
People need to
To talk to someone
People need
A shoulder to lean on
We come on
To help you out
We come on
To jest about
We come on
To make your day
We come on
Just to play
People need to articulate
To discuss fact or fate
People need to socialize
We need answers
To our why’s
We still come on
everyday
To see what others
have to say
We still come on
To criticize
We still come on
To tell our lies
We still come on.
2007-05-31 18:31:43 · 5 answers · asked by maev 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Y'all guessed it. I really wish I could give y'all more than 2 points. Thanks for taking the time to read it.
2007-05-31 19:23:37 · update #1
A very healthy need, this need for companionship: friends to talk to, to listen to, to love, to share: very well brought out in the piece that you have created! well done!
2007-05-31 19:39:38 · answer #1 · answered by swanjarvi 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like it, except for the line breaks, which seem unnecessary. Are you talking about Yahoo?
2007-06-01 02:04:05 · answer #2 · answered by LodiTX 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
o, & i juz wanna b 1 of ya.. com'on mke an0thr nice p0em.. i'd surely love to read it again..
2007-06-01 06:00:40 · answer #3 · answered by ô,ô 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i take it this is talking about yahoo! answers??
its good! i like it =]
2007-06-01 02:02:57 · answer #4 · answered by jo 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
nice one...
2007-06-01 01:42:57 · answer #5 · answered by Krish 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋