perhaps you're trying to suggest that the past is but a shadow, the future uncertain. therefore we must live in the present with all the zeal, and enthusiasm possible (maybe that's why you used oats).
2007-05-31 06:02:30
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answer #1
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answered by Anonymous
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The first two lines suggest a very simple life, living in the Now instead of the past or future.
The last line makes it clear that the Haiku is about a horse.
2007-05-31 04:45:39
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answered by open4one 7
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Double points are now the way A haiku earns you the pay A limerick instead is best for your head I don't care what you say
2016-05-17 21:04:45
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answered by ? 3
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That's very good!
I'm just gonna take a stab at it, although I'm probably wrong.
You mean to have people stop worrying what they did wrong in the past and realize it's a brand new day; so stop moping around in bed and get out there and see the world.
That's my guess.
2007-05-31 04:28:30
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answered by Anonymous
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isn't a haiku supposed to include a theme of nature in it.
look i checked it ,form the american heritage dictionary:-
A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
2007-05-31 04:43:41
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answered by cute-goddess 5
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your point is: its a new day and a new beginning
2007-05-31 04:25:49
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answered by iNeedhelp 4
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Your trying to express "Today"
2007-05-31 04:31:53
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answered by Prashanth 1
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today in the morning
2007-05-31 06:08:49
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answered by Anonymous
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So what IS your point?
2007-05-31 04:38:22
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answered by brazilexile 2
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