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Yesterday is gone
It's now before tomorrow
So wake and eat oats.

2007-05-31 04:22:43 · 9 answers · asked by HardLee 2 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

9 answers

perhaps you're trying to suggest that the past is but a shadow, the future uncertain. therefore we must live in the present with all the zeal, and enthusiasm possible (maybe that's why you used oats).

2007-05-31 06:02:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

The first two lines suggest a very simple life, living in the Now instead of the past or future.

The last line makes it clear that the Haiku is about a horse.

2007-05-31 04:45:39 · answer #2 · answered by open4one 7 · 1 0

Double points are now the way A haiku earns you the pay A limerick instead is best for your head I don't care what you say

2016-05-17 21:04:45 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0 0

That's very good!
I'm just gonna take a stab at it, although I'm probably wrong.

You mean to have people stop worrying what they did wrong in the past and realize it's a brand new day; so stop moping around in bed and get out there and see the world.

That's my guess.

2007-05-31 04:28:30 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

isn't a haiku supposed to include a theme of nature in it.

look i checked it ,form the american heritage dictionary:-
A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

2007-05-31 04:43:41 · answer #5 · answered by cute-goddess 5 · 1 1

your point is: its a new day and a new beginning

2007-05-31 04:25:49 · answer #6 · answered by iNeedhelp 4 · 0 0

Your trying to express "Today"

2007-05-31 04:31:53 · answer #7 · answered by Prashanth 1 · 0 0

today in the morning

2007-05-31 06:08:49 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

So what IS your point?

2007-05-31 04:38:22 · answer #9 · answered by brazilexile 2 · 0 0

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