Hurting For
Create a heart of stone
Protect it from breaking
Live life one day at a time
You're never really be alive
Pains part of life
The best things are worth hurting for
It never goes away
It never gets better
Just move on
Get Stronger
What hurts now
Might not hurt later
Pains part of life
Loving is worth hurting for
2007-05-30 16:50:47 · 7 answers · asked by Broken Angel 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
this poem is very deep and truthful. whoever wrote this poem is very talented..
2007-05-30 16:54:53 · answer #1 · answered by Malaysia 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it all, except the 4th stanza. Sort of takes away the hope and redemption of the rest of it.
You might try writing out what your overarching thought is.
Is it: Life can be painful, but we learn and grow stronger from the pain
Or is it: Life can be painful and the pain never gets better or goes away. Life is just pain.
Also in the 3rd stanza, I think there's a typo: didn't you mean "YOU'LL never really be..."
Another typo in 3rd stanza: "Pain(apostrophe)s part of life"
(i.e. pain is=pain's)
Very heartfelt.
2007-05-31 00:07:44 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very well written. Hearfelt and honest. Continue to write. You have some talent there.
2007-05-31 00:01:01 · answer #3 · answered by Firespider 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't care for it. Almost every line of it is a quote from somewhere. But, if writing is what you like to do, keep doing it, you will never get better if you don't keep trying.
2007-05-30 23:57:58 · answer #4 · answered by Squeakers 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It is very nice but I think it should be You'll never really be alive, other than that it is very nice and touching.
2007-05-30 23:57:16 · answer #5 · answered by Tigerluvr 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very well written
2007-05-30 23:53:21 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice
2007-05-30 23:53:52 · answer #7 · answered by × 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋