i wrote 20-line epithah for ceasar death . read it and see if it rhyme and sound like poetry. give example?

Question

Julius Ceasar walked among us in this world.
While he was here, he was a great leader.
His accomplishments were many and great.
He was a trusting friend, a generous father, and a shining example.
Julius Ceasar expanded our influence across the many lands, and across the seas that surround us.
He was the envy of many, the glory of many, and the hero of many.
We all loved him.
He was my friend, faithful and just to me.
May the peace be with him.
We'll remember the greatness he brings to us.
We'll cherish his kindness.
He was ambition and has everything he desire.
He died because of someone jealousy.
His revenge will hunt that person with great power.
Even though he refuses the crown, I will remember him as a king.
Because to me, he was a great leader , and to you all , he was your provider in need.
And now he is gone.
The king is dead.
Long live the king.
Farewell my friend

Answer 1

Obviously, there is no rhyme scheme in this piece of writing, and I would hardly call it a poem. A tribute, yes; a poem, no.

Chow!!

Answer 2

It's okay, I think I'd go for some kind of uniformity like starting every line with "He was..." or "We will remember..." Also, it's spelled Caesar and the word is epitaph.

Answer 3

Dont you have one of those spell check things? You gotta learn how to spell Caesar first . The poem is nice, it's good.

Answer 4

I dont thik it rhymes too much but not all poetry rhymes. It is great, when I die I hope I could have someone like you write my epithah ( :-) ).