please, revise this poem and put a title on it. I am not a native, need your help with English.?

Question

I closed the door
and found myself again
searching for answers
that only time will bring
reaching out to memories
that insist to stay
I know the day is done
once more I closed that door behind me
even though you're gone
I must live
and dream
I turn on the light
knowing that I'll be alright
I lay my books on the chair
and walk towards nowhere
I hear the sound of silence
and as far as I am aware,
it does not bother me anymore
If that door could talk...
now it's just me
and the very thought of you
does not kill me as before
I closed that door
not with tears
not with a trace of fear
but with pride
and joy
because
I'm finally learning to live without you.

Answer 1

How about calling this: " I Closed That Door," or "The Door."

The only thing I noticed that didn't seem right was "that insist to stay" (line 6). I would change it to: "that insist on staying." I think that's better grammar.

That's pretty--I don't know whether it sounds more like a song or poem, though, because it doesn't rhyme most of the time.

Answer 2

I think your poem is wonderful.

I only have one correction and it is a common English spelling mistake: all right. You spelled it as one word which is incorrect.

I would title it: Finding Myself

Answer 3

It was absolutely beautiful. I wouldn't change it. I would call it "Discovering".

Answer 4

The day is done and i am OK