The Butterfly Effect
We could change the future
If we change our past.
Let's fix the mistakes
And break free from the caste.
Let us be the butterflies
And change the world
Before all we know
Becomes unfurled.
We can't waste time
And we'll do what we can.
All you have to do
Is take my hand.
Let's take the plunge
And make things right
So we won't be
Alone tonight.
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:) It went from the chaos theory, to the butterfly effect, to a love poem... crazy, huh?
2007-05-28 14:54:01 · 15 answers · asked by Illusen ♫ 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
My eyes are swollen and my teeth are throbbing.
2007-05-28 14:56:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Cute and original! Had to star this one. I like the idea that a small "we" can fix the world, since the flutter of a butterfly's wing in China may change the weather in California. Didn't see the love poem twist coming, though, and that is very nice.
Technically, the rhythm could use a little work, and this poem is well worth the time it would take to improve that aspect of it.
2007-05-28 19:34:27 · answer #2 · answered by Husker41 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nicely sweetie all I do is cry these days so how long will you wait? i choose a buddy such as you who is conscious that normally crying is what helps. So bored with persons telling me how reliable i'm, in the event that they only knew how lots I weep bitter tears at the back of closed doors they does not label me as reliable.
2016-10-06 05:30:56 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah it did. Interesting. You gave it another perspective to it. Cool. Man, you're good--at least to me. But I'm no expert, of course. Still good. Peace!
2007-05-28 14:58:20 · answer #4 · answered by Drivliam 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Sounds so nice. Here's one:
Everyone wants sunshine,
Nobody wants pain.
But we can't have a rainbow,
Without a little rain.
It's real short. lol. Your's sounds better.
2007-05-28 14:58:48 · answer #5 · answered by Summer Rain 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's a good poem
2007-05-28 14:58:37 · answer #6 · answered by SnowWhite92 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice keep up the good work
2007-06-05 11:28:06 · answer #7 · answered by mocha 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful :D
I love it
2007-05-31 09:22:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um, why did you post this in Polls and Surveys?
2007-05-28 14:56:44 · answer #9 · answered by ♥Heather♥ 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
nice
2007-06-05 13:04:42 · answer #10 · answered by Felix 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋