Im writing an essay for the Hemingway Code hero, this is the first line of it, does it sound okay?
The Old Man and the Sea is the one story, of all Hemingways stories, that really sticks out as his code hero.
2007-05-28 14:27:33 · 22 answers · asked by And kayla was like 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
How about this one.....
The Old Man and the Sea’s Santiago represents all things that are the hemingway code hero.
2007-05-28 14:35:25 · update #1
it makes sense but it's not written too good....try it like this:
Of all Hemingway stories, "The Old Man and the Sea" is the one that really exemplifies his code hero.
good luck! =]
2007-05-28 14:32:53 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
The Old Man and the Sea is the one story - of all Hemingways stories - that really sticks out as his code hero.
2007-05-31 02:15:23 · answer #2 · answered by tuthutop 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What's a code hero?
Santiago in The Old Man and the Sea epitomises Hemingway's ideal of the "code hero"
2007-05-28 22:07:14 · answer #3 · answered by SteveT 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, it could use a little revision, I'd say. How about
"In "The Old Man and the Sea", the main character, Santiago, displays those qualities of strength, endurance and grace under pressure that make him the epitome of the Hemingway "code hero."
2007-05-28 14:36:50 · answer #4 · answered by johnslat 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The grammar is fine... Keep it simple n crisp...
Of all Hemingway's stories,The Old Man and the Sea is the one that really epitomizes his code hero.
Thats what I'd prefer cause using the word 'story' twice could better be avoided.
2007-05-29 10:38:35 · answer #5 · answered by isawdat 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds okay but its kind of confusing try this:
The Old MAn and the Sea is the story that sticks out as Hemingways code hero.
SRY i can't tell the ppl and the book name apart. hope i helped!!!!
2007-05-28 14:36:24 · answer #6 · answered by dancer234 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
True story..fishing by the river T...., on the worm..never had a seatrout in my life..suddenly this bar of silver takes and is leaping and plunging out of the water.. Meanwhile a lurking heron seeing the distressed fish pounces and chases it as I'm hauling it in. I start shouting and throwing stones to fend off the bird.. a crowd gathers alternately booing, jeering and shouting encouragement. Land the fish..pats on the back..'well done son!' ..'that was like a combination of the old man and the sea, moby dick and the rhyme of the ancient mariner' Park ranger comes along an' confiscates fish..no permit..fishing with illegal bait..trudge home..rod on my back like a cross now..defeated by the forces of Parkness..resurrected in spirit.
2007-05-28 15:29:36 · answer #7 · answered by RTF 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You should start by saying, Of all Hemingway's stories, i feel that "The Old Man and the Sea is the ........... because.......... .
2007-05-28 14:32:54 · answer #8 · answered by chizzy 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How about this: In "The Old Man and the Sea", Hemmingway characterises most fully, his code hero.
2007-05-28 15:36:30 · answer #9 · answered by UnaNi 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first one sounds ok.But try putting the coma after the name of the story book.
2007-05-28 20:18:41 · answer #10 · answered by robbie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋