Last Goodbye Letter
I have walked a not a thousand but a million miles in love, every pace struggling to keep my heart beating. I have seen every color the rainbow needs to show, have drawn every twighlight, gone through every storm. Each sunset the sky has to show, my eyes have gathered, with tears unknown. I have loved like nobody before.
Every hello seemed to pass unnoticed, every goodbye is every time the closest to my own destiny to refrain my own last embankment. I have been stabbed not in the back but in my heart, in every memory that now I need to part. Charm has been his middle name, with only a smile, I guess I am to blame.
So here I go one last time, to say I’m through with all this lie, the one that told me every day, tomorrow you will be happy!, and it just went on and on, to my own oblivion.
It’s time to run, time to escape, reach for the Moon, and never fake. Time to leave those childish thoughts and dreams behind, as now I know, the bell rings, it IS time.
And with a pleasant hand shake, I bow my defenses out at stake, go, go! To Rome, the bridge of thought, to all the wonders of my heart, I say goodbye now presently as now I know we weren’t meant to be.
Ta ta! So long, my hours here have passed, and now.. to grow! To discover, my present inside blunder, I’ll see you in another life, and maybe even then write the same words I’m now declaring, you broke my heart, my soul you shattered, I’m gone, my love, I know to you it never mattered. So now I spread my soul and fly to the next boat to destiny, goodbye.
2007-05-28 13:05:08 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
What do you think of it? what impression does it give you, please?
2007-05-28 13:05:38 · update #1
It's beautifully written, but sounds like a suicide letter, which would be better if it didn't. It would be good to phrase it in such a way that there are better things for the heart waiting IN LIFE, and that you will move on to the beautiful things in life, spreading the love inside you to another who is waiting just over the hill, or something like that! :O)
2007-05-28 13:13:07 · answer #1 · answered by mch 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are not the only one, It seems if you have a sense of humor or like to play around with certain people other people get jealous and report you. Today was the first day that only received 1 violation, it's usually 3 or 4 a day and usually when I answer Big Bald's, Big Poppa's or Joey B's questions and I know it's not from them so it has be to from one of their fans, so I will no longer answer their questions because of some @ss hole. If you decide to leave good luck to you and it was fun playing around with you on here and if you decide to stay, Good for you!
2016-05-20 01:42:05 · answer #2 · answered by carey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Go out and talk to somebody. Don't drink or smoke or take drugs.
If you are thinking about committing suicide, do it, don't wait. NOOOOTTTTT!!!!! (well, unless the doc told you that you're going to die in a specific amount of time)
You have pretty good English writing skill, i'd say start writing a book or something. Even if it is about yourself.
Last but not least: Read the next person's comment, just ignore mine!
2007-05-28 13:14:05 · answer #3 · answered by monkeyof1986 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think u have a great way with words it has a wonderful rhythm and these are all reasons why not to commit suicide
just 4 get about the past and look forward to a better tomorrow and believe me if you say its going to be a good day make it happen and and live a wonderful life
2007-05-28 13:10:30 · answer #4 · answered by fliptodasplitz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is beautifully written, however, it denotes escapism to me. Do you know Albert Camus? I like him, he was one of the greatest writers in the 20th century. I wrote down one of his quotes some years ago: But in the end one needs more courage to live rather than to kill himself.
2007-05-28 19:20:49 · answer #5 · answered by Arigato ne 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My dear friend, forget about what happened, life is beautiful try again. Don't thing about stupid things, believe me you have a good heart. 100% You will succeed in your life.
I LOVE YOU
2007-05-28 13:12:49 · answer #6 · answered by kandyudayan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's definitely going to evoke emotion. Send this to him. Nicely put, nicely done. Sorry to hear he wasn't the right guy. Going through something similar myself, only it's somewhat different. If you want to talk, feel free to click on my name and send me a message.
HOWEVER:
If this is a suicide note- PLEASE DO NOT COMMIT SUICIDE, GO TALK TO SOMEONE!!! PLEASE DON'T, MY COUSIN COMMITED SUICIDE AND IT WAS AWFUL...PLEASE DON'T, PLEASE GO TALK TO SOMEONE IF THIS IS THE CASE!!!
2007-05-28 14:38:34 · answer #7 · answered by Kiara 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's quite philosophical and poetic. nice little piece.
2007-05-28 19:23:33 · answer #8 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
their are alway's other people to love.you need to help other people.don't do something stupid.
2007-05-28 13:14:24 · answer #9 · answered by tomm 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Omg.Please do NOT kill yourself.
2007-05-28 13:13:47 · answer #10 · answered by Keri 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋