Belly
smacking in the middle of the night makes a distinct sound, especially in the middle of the night when your
Pants
are not in the way to dull the sound that will reverberate off of your neighbors new tin roof he just had installed and eating
Sausage
only intensifies the thrill of the moment you have created.
2007-05-28 12:12:03 · 26 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Once again, your mastery of capturing the human emotion brings a tear to my eye. I am looking forward to the twinke one you promised me with your last poem.
2007-05-28 12:16:42 · answer #1 · answered by Kiss My Shaz 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
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2007-05-28 19:15:33 · answer #2 · answered by Tastebuds 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
That is the most touching revelation I've ever heard and I'm truly moved , especially that sausage part , fantastic job !
2007-05-28 21:36:18 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I see your earlier bike ride has inspired you or did you just eat some Memorial Day sausage with special powers. They broke the mold with you Buk.
2007-05-28 19:22:12 · answer #4 · answered by collynn 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Robert Frost - eat your heart out!
Buk - eat your sausage - you deserve it!
Rating: 9/10 (point deducted for using "off of")
2007-05-28 20:00:10 · answer #5 · answered by Dolores & the prune 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Better than Longfellow
2007-05-28 19:15:49 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Definately a ten. Your best work yet. Bravo
2007-05-28 19:15:24 · answer #7 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it would be better if you would add something about your thighs rubbing together when you walk. I just don't like it. It needs something else. I'm sorry.
2007-05-28 19:16:47 · answer #8 · answered by Phyllobates 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I'm moved deeply by this one. Tears r streaming down my face.
2007-05-28 19:15:42 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
I'd say your poem, is really deep.
The thought of your belly, ensures no sleep.
Nightmares of your pants, will keep me awake,
please...no more, for my sanity's sake.
2007-05-28 19:29:48 · answer #10 · answered by Taylor29 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋