Careless, care free, care less
God bless the useless
land of the free
go plant a tree
killing of me
in the name of anarchy
2007-05-28 06:59:36 · 22 answers · asked by Lestat 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
YES YES YES!!!
2007-05-28 07:11:33 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Poetry isnt all about rhyming. It might help if your poem had some meaning or even made some sort of sense. But it doesnt. The repeating of the word careless almost back to back doest help you out eather. Why would god belss the useless? And why would one kill you in the name of Anarchy? Are you refering to the land of the free being useless or are you saying that in the land of the free we should plant a tree. Like I said, poems arnt all about rhyming. They should make sense and have meaning behind them.
2007-05-28 14:05:33 · answer #2 · answered by ~~*Skadi*~~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I write poems too and it is pretty good but you have to make one change. Change the part "Land of the free, Go plant a tree, to "Land of the free, Don't you see, It's killing me." The reason you should change that is because who in their right mind would plant a tree in the land of the free.
2007-05-28 14:05:22 · answer #3 · answered by darryl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Freedom fighters everywhere
Then the loosers who don't really care
Careless carefree, so show me this land of the free
What's in a name, who takes the blame
I got no time for the games people play.
2007-05-28 14:07:49 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no answer if your a green saying our oxygen comes from the tree think again no dint think do some research ocean supplies
all to we need go for research green one
2007-05-28 14:07:58 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is supposed to be facetious? If so, I like it. Otherwise, I think it's a bit trite and sort of sing-songy. But I'm no expert.
2007-05-28 14:04:27 · answer #6 · answered by akuavi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A deep meaning, that I am still trying to understand.
2007-05-28 14:11:12 · answer #7 · answered by kayboff 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kitten entrails.
2007-05-28 14:02:11 · answer #8 · answered by Ryan P 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Much better âº. You sound like the new Shakespeare
2007-05-28 14:01:19 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I find it "interesting" (for lack of a better word) and slightly humorous, but I don't know why.
2007-05-28 14:02:11 · answer #10 · answered by Squeaky 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah thats nice
but i like the previous one too
2007-05-28 14:08:15 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋