Dark Matted Hair
killing with flair
death death dispair
blood in the gutter
victim without a mutter
statistics of the cutter
2007-05-28 06:51:00 · 24 answers · asked by Lestat 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
sweetie-are you proposing to me?
2007-05-28 06:55:05 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
It's dark, and I don't usually like poems that rhyme, but I think you've got a flair, dude. It's good.
Hope you take some lit and poetry classes. After you read about Sylvia Plath and the other confessionalists, you'll probably want to put your talent to better use than describing death and stuff. It's already been done and you'll get bored with it after a while.
But you have a flair, definitely.
2007-05-28 13:57:34 · answer #2 · answered by Lively 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a dark poem but nice.
2007-05-28 14:16:11 · answer #3 · answered by Unique 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bit too sunny and happy for my taste
2007-05-28 13:53:55 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ermm..Every poem has cons and pros and this has slightly more cons than pros but it is good in a way :)
2007-05-28 13:56:24 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem sucks to be honest
2007-05-28 13:54:56 · answer #6 · answered by *Kita Boo* 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Seems a little sadistic, but to each his own
2007-05-28 13:53:56 · answer #7 · answered by pollywog 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I find this poem very sad.
2007-05-28 13:59:14 · answer #8 · answered by kayboff 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It would make good rap music.
2007-05-28 14:03:15 · answer #9 · answered by Optimistic 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no i really don't. Too morbid for moi
2007-05-28 13:54:56 · answer #10 · answered by Nora G 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋