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"Jazz,My PC has got some problems, it would switch off the electric power at any time when I start to log in or I using it.A friend said that it was the problem of electric power supply and it might be a fake.
ah,what sorrow I am,if it wasn't my fidgety and ignorance to the PC,I wouldn't get such thing,it is my fault! And I am swearing that it will never happen again,I have got the lesson!"

Thank you!

2007-05-28 05:23:18 · 4 answers · asked by swordxka 1 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

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Jazz,My PC has got some problems,
(no correction)
it would switch off the electric power at any time when I start to log in or I using it.

(correction) The computer shuts off suddenly when I try to use it.

A friend said that it was the problem of electric power supply and it might be a fake.

(correction) A friend of mine said that it may be a bad power supply or a viral problem.

ah,what sorrow I am,if it wasn't my fidgety and ignorance to the PC
I wouldn't get such thing,it is my fault!

(correction) i really hope that my lack of knowledge using the computer didn't cause this problem.

,And I am swearing that it will never happen again,I have got the lesson!
(correction) I have learned my lesson, and it will never happen again.

Semper Fi

2007-05-28 05:34:20 · answer #1 · answered by Donald Robinson 1 · 1 0

Thanks for serving, son. I'm sorry you're having trouble with your computer. But your question is vague. Just make sure you buy computer products from a reputable dealer, or ask the help of a trusted friend.

2007-05-28 12:33:59 · answer #2 · answered by jsardi56 7 · 0 0

Not sure what you're asking.

2007-05-28 12:26:45 · answer #3 · answered by dazi369 2 · 0 0

i have absolutly no idea

2007-05-28 12:26:29 · answer #4 · answered by ryan 1 · 0 0

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