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I thought we could try something. (A survey poem) In honor of all the fallen soldiers from the past to preset.

I will start be writing a couple lines- I guess the only rules would be-to speak from the heart and make it rhyme if possible. Doesnt have to be a full thought-Just write a couple lines and come back later to read the total tribut.

'We breath the air from day-to-day,
from lives like ours that came to pay-

2007-05-27 11:24:35 · 18 answers · asked by ? 5 in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

18 answers

For our country you do serve
All my thanks you deserve

2007-05-27 11:29:51 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3 0

Some fell on beaches,
others went down in fields

2007-05-27 18:43:43 · answer #2 · answered by Nevada Slim 2 · 1 0

We breath the air from day-to-day, ( not mine )
from lives like ours that came to pay- ( not mine )
They put themselves on the line. ( not mine )
To defend our country, yours and mine. ( not mine )
a price to high, ( not mine )
in a land far away. ( not mine )
we don't know their names, ( mine from now on )
they don't want any fame,
most of us cried the day,
they fought there lives away,
but, those soldiers did us proud,
they were shouting very loud,
they lost buddies in the war,
i just want there to be no more,
oh, how we miss them,
they were brave women and men.



I know I'm not that good, but i wanted to try.

2007-05-27 18:34:33 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

Not in a poetic mood, but I'm definitely experiencing the sentiment. God Bless them all and their families.

2007-05-27 22:29:11 · answer #4 · answered by Nels 7 · 0 0

You put yourself on the line
to fight for freedom
yours and mine.
Then you paid the ultimate price
when, with honour and bravery
you gave your life.
We will not forget.

2007-05-27 22:50:56 · answer #5 · answered by Lauren J 6 · 0 0

Not a day goes by
That I do not cry
For your young life
was not lived in strife,

2007-05-27 21:30:01 · answer #6 · answered by tictak kat 7 · 0 0

and we'd like to say
we're not unforgiving
we know that we're living
while under soil soliders lay

2007-05-27 18:30:25 · answer #7 · answered by gilmorefan74 2 · 2 0

a price to high,
in a land far away.

2007-05-27 18:27:19 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 3 0

our sons and daughters lives they gave
for all our families i always pray

2007-05-27 18:34:47 · answer #9 · answered by Ronni 6 · 3 0

We will aways remember you, and for ever pray.

2007-05-27 18:38:11 · answer #10 · answered by storm 2 · 2 0

They put themselves on the line.
To defend our country, yours and mine.

2007-05-27 18:27:06 · answer #11 · answered by Firespider 7 · 3 0

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