Is the stories and poems that I wrote in my msn group good?

Question

http://groups.msn.com/HeartbrokenFovever

Is the stories and poems that I wrote in my msn group good?

PS. I wrote everything in there.

Answer 1

They are bette than some of the stuff I have read.

Answer 2

Very sweet. Sometimes like a diary. Insightful at times. On target for the time you are in .... adolescence. Seems like in adolescence nobody can say anything from a m/f perspective to each other. It's almost always second hand.

I would encourage you to keep writing. This is much like a journal. Engaging but also very much a part of the experience of people in your age group. That's not a dis. That's the same thing I went thru in your age group at that time in my life.

Answer 3

You show great potential but you REALLY need to work on your grammar and vocabulary...