I need some help with my wording of these sentences?

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I need some help with my wording of these sentences?

I need some help with my wording of these sentences, or i need some opinions?

For those who fall get up.
Don't sit on the ground,
and take the punch.

I know from regret.
The regret of giveing up.

I personaly dont do not like where i say "Don't sit on the ground, and take the punch." i want to replace punch.

2007-05-27 08:22:03 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay

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pain, blow, hurt, chance.hurt, or miss the chance, instead of take the .

2007-05-27 08:45:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

I don't know. If they're on the ground, would kicks be better?

2007-05-27 09:52:43 · answer #2 · answered by SKCave 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋