What do you think of my poem?

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What do you think of my poem?

I awoke from sleep last night
And saw shimmering in my bed
A firefly, a beautiful firefly
This is what he said
Come follow me Oh Human
Come journey in the nightland
This is what I did
Please don't ask my why
I took my hand and squashed that bug
And then went back to dreamland.

2007-05-27 01:08:17 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

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huh! must've been fantastic dreamland as you developed extra limbs. . . . or how to do this, "I took my hand and squashed that bug"?

2007-05-27 04:15:36 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Its ok. Kinda cute..Nothing OMG no offense but its not bad.

2007-05-27 01:12:46 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋