This is a note for my boyfriend 33. I need to revise this sentence in proper grammar you can add a sentence or too if you need to. Want to tell him that ijust cant wait to have him lie next to me and feel his touch. Ok heres sentences I want revised mostly the first sentence:
Lying next to you. my head on your chest, your arm around me, kissing me ever so gently- feeling your love. It's all I ever wanted.
Please reply ASAP thanks :-)
2007-05-26 21:57:46 · 4 answers · asked by simplemiss71 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
When I'm lying next to you, my head on your chest, with your arm around me while you're kissing me ever so gently, I'm feeling your love and that's all I've ever wanted.
2007-05-26 22:03:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-06 03:09:20 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
(jeepers, here goes...)
I want to lie down beside you with my head resting on your chest, your arm around me as you kiss me ever so gently, and feeling your love for me - It's all i ever want from you sweetheart..
(whew..............but 2 points is 2 points.....lol)
2007-05-26 22:13:28 · answer #3 · answered by Sanjiv 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey if it comes from the heart - you won't need grammar!
Just say it!!!
2007-05-26 22:03:29 · answer #4 · answered by renclrk 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋