I dont know what to say in the song.I cant think of anything for the chorus. i lost my friend,he was only 13 and i`m 13 too.
2007-05-26 17:37:30 · 4 answers · asked by Richelle 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Other - Music
hmmmm... hard to say on just those details. obviously, i'm thinking sad... maybe with minor chords instead of major? well, maybe you could somehow say why you lost him, or why he's lost to you. I wouldn't directly say how you feel, because I think that's what your song is trying to convey (right?). Maybe something about how the world is without him, how your life is without him, how the loss has affected you. idk just suggestions. i love to hear it some time.
2007-05-26 17:47:05 · answer #1 · answered by cranberry 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aw, I'm so sorry...
: (
After losing someone at 27 I just kept wishing that the 'right' song, the kind I wanted, would turn up. Either in '05 or early '06 I finally heard "Forever" by Vertical Horizon...it's such a perfect and great song. Here is a link, maybe it will be of some inspiration...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RRw5XWp-saQ
Take one day at a time kiddo... <3
2007-05-26 17:47:53 · answer #2 · answered by Indigo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is too short for those in love, but my memories of you will live forever.
or
Death is not the end, nor my memories of you
2007-05-26 18:01:28 · answer #3 · answered by gregory_dittman 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the chorus could be her/his favorite thign to say or do
and the whole song could be about wat yall di together and at teh very end say good bye.
2007-05-26 17:45:22 · answer #4 · answered by kit kat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋