Our love flows like a river of blood,
rushing through my viens,
a daggar of words pierces the artery,
ripping the passion into a fiery inferno of pain and sorrow,
our lives drip away,
as the dizziness and confusion take over,
why did this happen?
what went wrong?
never before has our love faded,
is this the end?
my world dims, as emptyness soaks into every pore of my heart,
finally my world goes black,
"eternity"flashes before my eyes,
so much shorter then i had expected,
"forever"in the blink of an eye,
did it even mean anything?
all emotions run through my mind,
yet i feel nothing,
i am completly numb,
yet fully alive,
is this the true meaning of hell?
2007-05-26 15:23:03 · 4 answers · asked by rockandroll5556 2 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
Poetry, right?
I don't want to make light of your feelings, but it sounds like a love affair that has ended - the sex was good, but there was no passion. But then love is not passion, and romance is fleeting, although sometimes repeated.
2007-05-26 15:35:53 · answer #1 · answered by cavassi 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It's good...but a few of the lines have already been used by various metal songs. I'll let you figure out by who...although I suspect you already know.
our lives drip away
finally my world goes black
my world dims, as emptyness soaks into every pore of my heart
is this the true meaning of hell?
2007-05-26 15:33:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Wow. thats pretty deep. It comes off to me like somene has gotten their heart ripped out by someone they truly cared about. It also seems to that it implies that love can be a horrible thing. Its really awesome. Lots of descriptive text.
2007-05-26 15:32:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
It makes me sad that someone is in that much pain and my wish for them is that they find hope again soon.
The work is very descriptive and impactful.
2007-05-26 15:32:32 · answer #4 · answered by maisie 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋