What do you think of this song that I made? "Warrior"?

Question

There are times
Where people seem
To be all against you
And to want to destroy your life

But it is your choice
To believe in them
Or in yourself and just move on

But you know what the right choice is
It’s the one that makes you
Truly happy no matter what

And now I know that
They cannot
Stop me


Chorus:
Because I’m a warrior
I was made for this war
You may be the strongest knight
But I know that I’m stronger than you
You may have the sword
But I have the shield
And I have the brain
The determination
The faith
I have everything that I need
And I’m the one who’s gonna win this war


I spent my entire life training for this war
Day and night
Because I knew that one day it would come
And I had to be 100% ready

This is the war of the destiny
And only the best ones win
There is no give up or give in
There’s only move on and fight



And you know that
No matter what
They can’t stop you

And even if you’re almost losing
You get up
And do your best to win


Chorus (X1)


And when it’s time to fight
You do it with you heart and soul


Chorus (X1)

Answer 1

Nice song,very powerfull.Did u write yourself coz if u did,theres a talent there.Star 4 u!

Answer 2

Creative

Answer 3

I ve heard like ten or so warrior songs mostly trance/tribal techno so i have to hear the music to go with it but the lyrics were pretty good but not as good as dance 2 trance's. Might work though if you have open mic nights for poetry reading anywhere in your area.

Answer 4

That speaks to me on so many levels ..... I love songs like this .....which is why Manowar is my favorite band of all time.... Great job, keep it up.

Answer 5

Very empowering

Answer 6

not bad

Answer 7

ooh thanks, I copyrighted it, and its mine, and im rich.
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