My First Love” May 2007
You were the one,
The one and only,
My very first love.
It only lasted a while,
But you always made me smile.
You knew how to make me happy
Especially when you called me sweetie.
My feelings showed that I really cared
I will always remember the memories we have shared
I really did like you.
I even loved you too.
I know we always loved to talk,
I wished we could have taken just one walk.
I wanted you to hold my hand,
And say you were my man.
Losing you is one of my regrets.
You, I will never ever forget.
We never hugged or even kissed,
But, you I will truly miss.
I wished we could be together.
In my heart you will be cherished forever.
You were my very first true love
2007-05-25 21:29:12 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Nice work. Heartfelt and honest.
2007-05-25 21:46:17 · answer #1 · answered by Firespider 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
that's stunningly proper. I even have experienced "mortals crammed together with his easy" precise here! This jogs my memory of Hebrews 13:2 (i've got faith) approximately eye-catching angels unawares. Love this!
2016-11-05 10:44:00 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good job. Nicely put. If it came from your heart, then that's perfect
2007-05-25 21:31:52 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Go and watch the movie Midnight Cowboy and then rewrite your poem.
2007-05-25 21:33:39 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
what happend to him?
that's a very sentimental poem! Good job!
2007-05-25 21:35:48 · answer #5 · answered by buttercup 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
anything from the heart,sweetheart is grand!!it almost made me cry.....everybody has a broken heart.....and i know it hurts!!but,WE will survive!!now dry all those tears,and find sby who will truly love YOU!!
2007-05-25 22:21:27 · answer #6 · answered by ....FED UP............ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww, i got a bit choked up, and i got goosebumps... very sad poem, but lovely, i liked it
2007-05-26 01:52:46 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good!
2007-05-26 05:24:03 · answer #8 · answered by chris j 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nicely done,I like it.
2007-05-25 21:34:10 · answer #9 · answered by Tazz 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it!
2007-05-25 21:42:19 · answer #10 · answered by J♥R♥R 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋