I need to write a short story for english its supposed to be a Fictional/ narrative...I started it off but I need help with the rest PLEASE
one day a girl named Lesley was getting ready for her big softball game, that atarts at 6 o clock.
"mom its 5:30 we have to go" said Lesley.
"okay", asid the mother, on the way driving to the game a deer jumped out in to the road. They swirved too miss it but ended up hitting a pole. "so how am I going to get to thegame?" Lesley murmered to herself.
Now I really need help with the rest PLEASE!!!
2007-05-24 14:17:26 · 3 answers · asked by jess 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
You need to elaborate on everything- expand, describe more. it's kind of hard to follow what you are saying because you are switching topics really fast. And DONT, don't start out with one day. Start out with something more interesting. How long does your story have to be?
2007-05-24 14:27:02 · answer #1 · answered by liveloveride 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Use your cell phone to call your father, a repair shop, a towing service, an auto rental company, and definitely your insurance company.
2007-05-24 14:26:01 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The place you need to go is to a library. Stop using this site because you are too lazy to do your own homework.
2007-05-24 14:25:47 · answer #3 · answered by Balasubas 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋