What is this passion that I feel inside
Such love and joy that I cannot hide
Do you see what you do when you are next to me
You've let me loose, you've set me free
I've tried to hold back this tied of emotion
But I just got sucked into this heavenly ocean
I'm drifting on the timeless currents of pure bliss
Hoping I will alway feel like this
For in your arms is where I'm at
No longer caring for this and that
I've just surrendered all I am
So that I may be, forever your man
Yes, I wrote it.
2007-05-23 11:37:20 · 19 answers · asked by honest guy 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
That is a great poem. If You feel that way about someone, then they should feel lucky. Good luck in life.
2007-05-23 11:52:30 · answer #1 · answered by Ginnykitty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's your feelings, and that's the nice, sweet part.
It's not written in rhythm though, so it doesn't exactly flow. This is a good draft, to bring it to rhythm, concentrate on the syllable count.
2007-05-23 11:55:33 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is from your heart, so I think it is beautiful. I think that your girlfriend will love it. For me anyway, buying things are not as precious as sentimentals. this poem will be something that she can cherish forever whereas something bought gets old way too fast.
2007-05-23 11:50:13 · answer #3 · answered by Ruby Red 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-26 21:08:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ahhhhhh that is soooooooo sweet. And not that it would ever happen, but if my husband ever wrote me something like that i would totally be in tears of happiness and give him the biggest hug ever.
2007-05-23 11:43:49 · answer #5 · answered by wilfeistykitten2003 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful. If you use it when you just meet someone, she will think you are a player. If you use it with someone you have been seeing, she will be yours forever. Good Luck.
2007-05-23 11:43:26 · answer #6 · answered by jay 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
depends if ure tryin to use this as a pick up line or is it for sumone u really truly feel that way for???
2007-05-23 11:41:00 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It depends on who. If it someone i cherish I would be really touched and would appreciate every bit of him.
2007-05-23 11:41:26 · answer #8 · answered by Oby O 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
if you decide to leaver her give ME a shout. Every woman loves a man like that
2007-05-23 11:41:15 · answer #9 · answered by Cynthia P 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
That is very sweet...any girl would love it if their guy wrote that.
2007-05-23 11:42:13 · answer #10 · answered by ♥Mrs. Mac♥ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋