cutting through
my soul broken
what is left?
i hate you
you don't love me anymore
i can't move on
you cheat on me
what is new?
our friendshp is broken
you cna't do noghting to make me happy now
why did you do this to me
hate my life
i just wanna be dead
i cry in school, in my room, in the car anywhere i just cry
how much i give you
you just useing me
please need me alone and don't talk to me!!!
2007-05-23 11:15:37 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
Not bad - your emotions really come through.
2007-05-23 11:27:19 · answer #1 · answered by Matt G 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When the Twilight begins to fade
It marks the end of another day
Where you and I are with each other
Holding close our time together
I gently hold you in my arms
Never wanting to cause you harm
Quietly yearning to feel your lips
Then our hearts meet in a kiss
The sunlight gives its last ray of light
As we hold each other tight
We both can feel the words unspoken
Of our love and sincere emotion
I never knew I could feel like this
Till that moment when we kissed
I cannot deny these feelings are true
For I only feel this way when I'm with you
2007-05-23 18:35:01 · answer #2 · answered by honest guy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem. I see you put a lot of thought in it. Very Good. Don't stop writing, write more poem you're good at it
2007-05-23 18:19:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wonder why this isn't in the literature section.
it needs some work, honestly
2007-05-23 18:20:02 · answer #4 · answered by John B 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Serious issues. Be ridden of the loser who cheated on you.
2007-05-23 20:43:05 · answer #5 · answered by seahorse 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
is this poam is this how you feel now,
give this poam to the one that made you feel this way.
2007-05-23 18:20:51 · answer #6 · answered by birddog 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
INTENSE!!!!!
Use spell check next time
2007-05-23 18:19:42 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty good
2007-05-23 18:18:22 · answer #8 · answered by Chris F 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it...
2007-05-23 18:19:23 · answer #9 · answered by running2adream 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋