He's the one that I look up to
The one who's always been there
So many times I wanted to die
So many times I could not find a way out
And then you reached out
Your smile can light up a room
A funny joke make me forget my gloomy mood
And when I'm about to hit the flood
You give me your hads and help me even more
2007-05-23 10:10:55 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
I meant to say *FLOOR* instead of flood and *HANDS* instead of hads
2007-05-23 10:12:26 · update #1
It sounds depressing but is also inspiring because the person is saved at the end by this friend or deity.
2007-05-23 11:33:10 · answer #1 · answered by cynical 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lame. Not. Actually Thats pretty good. Not Pro, but pretty good.
2007-05-23 17:15:25 · answer #2 · answered by derswick66 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice for a non rhyming poem.
2007-05-23 17:19:48 · answer #3 · answered by J Doe 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If it does it for you it's great
2007-05-23 17:15:45 · answer #4 · answered by luckford2004 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋