I'm in the middle....I make noise but try not to sound like I am being murdered. I moan just enough so he knows when he's on the road to home :)
2007-05-23 07:25:22
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answered by Anonymous
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This might be the best piece of yours I've read. I like the straight forward narration and the visceral imagery. There are good internal rhymes and meter, and the poem flows well. I would drop the final stanza. The line "I felt no pain... " is so strong, you don't want to dilute it with the obvious. The opening sentence could be stronger. I don't see your intent with the line "and let the cross with Jesus fall to ground." There is also some clutter you could clear -- not the punctuation! LOL! But words like "then," "surely," "even," and "that moment." But very well done, Sir.
2016-05-21 00:04:16
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answered by ? 3
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I dont yell but i am a guy. My ex did this thing that would make squirm around the bed in exstacy...I dont mind if a girl is loud it makes us feel like we are really doing something.
2007-05-23 07:27:56
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answered by sweakinjr 2
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Loud if the sex is right
2007-05-23 11:23:58
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answered by Blondiee 4
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i am quiet but i like a woman to make more noise than me so i know if i am on the right path or if i need to change things up a little
2007-05-23 08:55:04
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answered by Anonymous
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i must admit, i am a loud person 2
2007-05-23 07:25:44
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answered by Mag 7
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Loud, and I'm not saying why! Hee Hee.
2007-05-23 07:24:45
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answered by bina64davis 6
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depends on the motion of the ocean
2007-05-23 07:28:10
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answered by Anonymous
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Loud, I wanna know you like it.Me loud I like it....
2007-05-23 07:25:41
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answered by Tazz 5
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usually loud... but sometimes im places where can't be loud.. heh heh heh
2007-05-23 07:30:45
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answered by Wes 5
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