It is one of those free verse non-ryhmy poems.
Basketball
Two teams
Running down the court
Fighting for the ball
Hoping for a shot
Cheering, Yelling
VICTORY!!!!!!!!
2007-05-22 10:47:40 · 9 answers · asked by Books books books! 4 in Sports ➔ Basketball
George, are you giving me a 4 rating because I have 8 !! marks instead of 5 ??? :)
2007-05-22 13:48:51 · update #1
"Roses are red, violets are blue, your poem sucks"????
Someone needs some help on their poetry lessons...
Your poems decent, dont listen to this scrub, but it needs a little more volume to it... none of that really paints an image, like free verse is meant to do.
2007-05-22 10:54:26 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
I'd score it between 4.526588 and 4.526587789.
If you would have put 5 ! instead of 8!, I would have given you a score between 4.526588 and 4.526587791
gw
2007-05-22 11:09:17 · answer #2 · answered by georgewallace78 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
At leats you tried just keep in mind practice makes perfect.
2007-05-22 11:58:45 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes.
2007-05-22 10:51:24 · answer #4 · answered by Spizike 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kind of pointless, isn't it? No depth, either. Sorry.
2007-05-22 11:35:37 · answer #5 · answered by Alice K 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have a poem too.
Snow falling on Cedars,
dancing in the wind,
I do not like your poem.
2007-05-22 10:53:04 · answer #6 · answered by Fifty5 3 · 1⤊ 4⤋
honestly ,idont like ur poem. sorry.
2007-05-22 11:06:05 · answer #7 · answered by jasminebudd 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
descent but not the best.
2007-05-22 11:20:39 · answer #8 · answered by Bryan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW!!!
2007-05-22 11:08:24 · answer #9 · answered by Erika C 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋