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Secrets of Time
My first memory is age five. I am loyal
faithful to my words. I am a sinner and I know it.
I choose to lie I choose to make my lie the truth.
I broke and my tears spoke for me. Please, please
think about it- Any one who never lied at age five
Maybe but not this artist inside/ Outside who knows?
I lusted for a life and in my bloodline
the present and my past
It was achieved - I did not achieve it
Age 24 a new direction -
This time no goals in mind! I will be humble
I can act it and acting is out time.
Those around me are my pawns
Not mind games but support and understanding
I have educated myself and felt nirvana
I walk on the sun and it charges my journey
Who are we and do you stand tall
I am now another teacher/student amongst us all

2007-05-21 20:54:59 · 3 answers · asked by waterzone 4 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

3 answers

It appears you are trying to hide life from the age of 6 to 23.

2007-05-22 03:34:31 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

what is sin that a a five year old would know about?
"I am a sinner and I know it."
At 24 and still regarding. "Those around me are my pawns"?

What about taking a siesta after that sumptuous a la carte of Cream of Cauliflower Soup, Linguini with Clam Sauce, Apricot Beef Casserole and Chicken Vindaloo!!

am sure you'll feel more nirvana and re-charge your journey into tantalising poetic experience!!


good luck buddy.

2007-05-22 01:43:35 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0 0

Eat more McDonalds

2007-05-21 21:03:01 · answer #3 · answered by lurk_diggler 3 · 0 0

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