what od you think of this one last poem:?

Question

Good Bye

Do not say Hi.
Good bye!
Just go away!
Far, far away.
Leave me alone
Please leave me be.
It needs to be done,
I want to move on,
Life with you ,
gets me sad
Day by day.
Life without you,
wouldn’t be so bad
Day by day.
I need to live my life!
I want to live life to the full!
So this is it,
Good Bye you!

Answer 1

Moving on sounds like it's the best thing you can do dear.

Love does hurt sometimes.

Answer 2

You are young, and this sounds good for a young person. I hope you are OK.

I share this with you:

I’ll Just Be Myself Tonight

In the past I’ve been known to force the action
To try and get in a little quick satisfaction
But you’re so different, girl, so much more than appetite
I think that I’ll just be myself tonight

In days of old I would screen and analyze
Then mysteriously I would don my disguise
Never to return by the warmth of new light
I want more, so I want to be myself tonight

What is there to gain?
With love in disdain,
One seed of grain
Bears gift with the rain.
Life is so plain
When love can’t remain.
Distributing pain -
But never again.

No more will I live under dark pretensions
With layers of charm wrapped around false intentions
I see the right and wrong of love, and I’ll do it right
Finally seeing myself, being myself tonight

Answer 3

What "od" I think of your poem. It sounds like a song I've heard before. Actually it's sad that someone may have hurt someone else so bad.

Answer 4

i'm very sorry your heart broken, but time does heal and you will find another guy and soon you will forget about this guy.

i used to feel the same way about a girl and i thought i would never get over, until i met another pretty girl

Answer 5

You are good.