Love hurts in the end
Love sucks for me and you
Love hurts real badly too
Just don’t go there at all
If you are already there,
Watch out and don’t fall,
Pain you will be unable to bear.
It may feel good to begin,
but it always hurts in the end.
2007-05-20 18:29:07 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It sounds like a good poem if you're feeling bitter.
Very heartfelt, nice work!
2007-05-20 18:34:07 · answer #1 · answered by Firespider 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Love heals for me and you
Love mends real badly too
Just don’t go there at all
If you are already here,
be yourself without fear,
That' all I really care.
It may feel weird to begin,
but it always thrills in the end.
2007-05-20 18:36:14 · answer #2 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's just me but maybe you should say "love hurts when it ends" rather than "love hurts in the end". Our society has taken the phrase hurts in the end to mean something else, something having to do with incarceration and lonely men. Just a thought.
2007-05-20 18:38:01 · answer #3 · answered by jack jagger 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a broken hearted poem.
2007-05-20 18:32:27 · answer #4 · answered by ♥c0c0puffz♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
once you've a lengthy time period relationship, write about the sturdy cases. Make it a touch rhyme.Throw each and everything on your heart right into a pen and ideal to somewhat of paper. once you've genuine love, nicely...sturdy 4 u :P
2016-10-18 09:13:48 · answer #5 · answered by cywinski 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The truth is that is a terrible poem. Sorry
2007-05-20 18:35:20 · answer #6 · answered by alex a 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like you have had bad encounters, quite well expressed but no everyone is made for one another thats why a lot of relationships tumble.
2007-05-20 18:34:09 · answer #7 · answered by Wesley 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it! it's just that it is a bit sad. and isn't your typical, ramantic love poem. ='( i still love it though. ^_^
wanna read my poem? click on my profile, look on my questions, and then you'll find two questions that say, "What do you think of this poem?" okay? thanks. ^_^
2007-05-20 18:35:58 · answer #8 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it keep it up girl! =o) ♥
2007-05-20 18:34:08 · answer #9 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good job & effort ;)
2007-05-20 18:32:11 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋