Could u plzz..rewrite this passage? correcting erros!?

Question

They live in a simple house which is made of tin and wood. It means that who are living in the other houses, they are all road hawkers family.(Some other rikshowpuller).

@200tk./2.86$ she was teached by a teacher. Genarally a nomal teacher takes 800-1200tk./11.43-17.14$ per month. But he cant bear more cost of his child.

After all they were living better. That time was 2001. In banladesh there was a election to select a new govt. After election the iron rules was taken by the new govt. they dicided that the govt. would not give any govt. notice or tender or advertisement in that national daily.Because it liked to support previous govt. So, He was retrenched from the emploee list. As a result he was out of employment. His also fall in a big trouble

Answer 1

They live in simple houses made of tin and wood. It means that those who are living in the other houses are all road Hawkers' family.(Some other rickshaw puller).

at 200tk./$2.86 she was taught by a teacher. Generally, a normal teacher makes between 800-1200tk./11.43-17.14$ per month. But he can't bear the additional cost of his child.

Eventually they were living better in 2001. In Bangladesh there was a election to select a new government. After election, the iron rules were taken by the new government. They decided that the government would not give any daily government notices, tender, or advertisement in that nation because it wanted to support previous government. So, He was removed from the employee list. As a result he was out of employment. He also fell in big trouble.

***This was pretty rough. I couldn't correct some of it because I couldn't even tell what you were trying to say. Try combining short sentences into longer ones. Make sure everything is spelled correctly, as I saw alot of misspellings. In the end you refer to "he," but we don't know who "he" is.

Answer 2

The road hawkers and the rickshaw pullers live in simple houses make of tin roofs and wood.

A teacher taught her (who ' her'?) at the rate of 200tk./2.68 (I do not know what this is!) Usually a teacher makes 800-1200tk./11.43-17.14$ per month. Now he cannot afford to pay for his child. (I think)

They lived better in 2001. In Bangladesh an election was held to elect a new Government. After the election the new government decided to return to the 'iron rules', and not announce anything in the national press. They wished to support the previous government. The father (your word = He?) was relieved of his duties and is now unemployed. Other troubles also befell the family.

Hope this helps. Your words were hard to interpret. Just keep trying to be understood. Was this for a letter or something?

Answer 3

(define who they is first, you need an antecedent for this pronoun and like all antecedents, it should come first)

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They live in a simple house, which is made of tin and wood. Their neighborhood is one of "road hawkers" and rickshaw pullers.

She was taught by a teacher at the expense of 200tk or $2.86 per (day, week, month). Typically, a teacher would earn six times as much, but the father could spare no greater expense. After all, they were living better.

It was in 2001 that in Bangladesh, there was an election to select a new government. After the election, the new government passed harsh laws. The government would no longer give notice, nor tender, nor advertise their activities to the nation on a daily basis. As a result of his support for the old government, the man was stricken from the employee list. He lost his job and fell onto hard times.