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just copy and paste that! i couldnt fit it on here! it comes up small but there is a little button to expand!! .. please help! (this is for an essay contest)
2007-05-19 17:27:53 · 5 answers · asked by M 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
assist in solving (drop THE) current environmental problems
President George W. Bush, have (not HAS)
They promote to citizens that biofuels have (not HAS) countless benefits; such as,
Hope that helps. Your last sentence, which is your Thesis looks good.
2007-05-19 17:44:27 · answer #1 · answered by English T 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cognizant of and
Cut current; it's unneccessary
George Bush, have
Don't use 'such as' 4 times in the same paragraph
Can you think of no synonyms for biofuels? You use it a lot in this paragraph.
2007-05-20 00:39:12 · answer #2 · answered by Alice K 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"....George W. Bush, HAVE promised.............They affirm to citizens that biofuels HAVE countless benefits......." We should, rather, tighten our belts a whole lot.
2007-05-20 00:52:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that iz really good! it also makes a point too lol! goodluck and i really hope u win!
2007-05-20 00:36:24 · answer #4 · answered by CollegeObsessed<3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
looks good to me.
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good luck.
2007-05-20 00:31:02 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋