What if you were to die today
Right in this moment
With out saying good-bye
I would cry and cry
And wouldn’t be shy
About the fact that I love you so much
Every smile
Every frown
Just knowing your there is enough for now
Even if you’re here
Just for a little while
Every moment, you usually make me smile
So it’s all good
Said and done
Even if it’s not regularly
You’re my only one.
2007-05-19 16:56:48 · 8 answers · asked by emily j 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I wrote it.
2007-05-19 17:04:27 · update #1
its pretty cute,
but not what i'd call a deep poem. doesnt really penetrate or have a profound meaning.
but its a cute poem that would probably be fitting for a card to your boyfriend or something
2007-05-19 18:40:21 · answer #1 · answered by Em 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it alot it really relates to my inner fellings and how i would feel if that happened to one of my friends. i feel the same way and have always wanted to write a poem like that but i cant get the words like you did. Awesome Job!!!!!!!
2007-05-20 00:03:52 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't understand it very much...It's nice and sounds okay, but it didn't seem to speak to me.
2007-05-20 00:00:29 · answer #3 · answered by misskittysm 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty Good! Where did you get it from?
2007-05-20 00:02:35 · answer #4 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it..It's really touching..
2007-05-20 00:06:07 · answer #5 · answered by Valkyrie of Lor 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awww.....that's right purty.
2007-05-20 00:00:54 · answer #6 · answered by kitten lover3 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very sentimental but nice....
2007-05-19 23:59:46 · answer #7 · answered by ☻♥*blistering barnicles *© 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really cute :D
2007-05-19 23:59:58 · answer #8 · answered by Rachel R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋