new poem just made up about something deep with little explination... what do you think?
warrior with no enemy
I am a warrior
with no enemy
I am a soldier
an I shall be me
I ain't afraid you
and I ain't afraid of life
I ain't afraid of what I do
and I carry no knife
I fight for something
I fight no body
I have nothing
and I shall be me
I have a past
and I can see
but this contrasts
why I shall be me
I have a future
that I cannot see
I am no butcher
I have become me
2007-05-19 15:13:52 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
i like your poem and keep up the good work
2007-05-22 22:33:10 · answer #1 · answered by THE MAKING OF ME(YOU FIQURE OUT) 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first stanza is OK, but I don't think much of the rest of the poem. Perhaps better grammar would help.
Being a Warrior is a state of mind and body. A Warrior is prepared to spring to a Defensive posture or Offensive posture as a situation demands.
One does not need an Enemy to be a Warrior. One must only be prepared to meet any enemy at any time.
2007-05-19 22:25:35 · answer #2 · answered by Doc Hudson 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Can't have good without evil, no black withouth white, no dark without light...and what would Superman be like without Lex.
"warrior is a person habitually engaged in warfare"
"War is a prolonged state of violent, large-scale conflict involving two or more groups of people."
The 'very' definition of 'warrior' would imply that there is more than two people or factions involved. Philosophically I guess you yourself could be the warrior and the enemy.
2007-05-19 22:26:36 · answer #3 · answered by SuzieQ 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yes. A warrior is simply a combatant. It isn't necessary for there to be opposition.
war·ri·or –noun
1. a person engaged or experienced in warfare; soldier.
2. a person who shows or has shown great vigor, courage, or aggressiveness, as in politics or athletics.
2007-05-19 22:17:16 · answer #4 · answered by Answerer 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
"A warrior with no enemy." I love this phrase!
2007-05-20 01:04:57 · answer #5 · answered by Tia 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That's pretty good. I like it.
2007-05-19 22:21:39 · answer #6 · answered by John 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Ya...
2007-05-19 22:38:12 · answer #7 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋