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I know you think I left you mom but I never left your side.

I've been right there to hold you everytime you've cried.

I'll always walk beside you mom, though see me you cannot.

Just know that I'm in heaven saving you a spot.

I wrote this for me ex boyfriend's mom when he committed suicide.

2007-05-17 11:42:42 · 12 answers · asked by ? 6 in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

12 answers

powerful. i love it. i am a father who lost a 11 1/2 month old to pneumonia. i love the poem!

2007-05-17 13:34:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

10/10. It's a beautiful poem.

2007-05-17 18:51:38 · answer #2 · answered by ..rae..♥ 5 · 1 0

normally a 7 but the sentiment boosts it up to a 9. =)

2007-05-17 19:42:32 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

10!
I really liked it.
( Much better then I can do)
Sorry 'bout what happened though =(

2007-05-17 18:47:08 · answer #4 · answered by ♥*MCR is LIFE*♥ 3 · 3 0

Beautiful. In every way.

2007-05-17 18:46:49 · answer #5 · answered by Linda B 3 · 3 0

aww dats soo sweet

2007-05-17 18:46:23 · answer #6 · answered by suzie. 5 · 1 0

i would suggest changing though see me you cannot. it sounds a little to corny. other than that its really good.

2007-05-17 18:48:32 · answer #7 · answered by tron451 3 · 1 0

Awww, its cute

2007-05-17 18:47:17 · answer #8 · answered by ♥♪♫[K]ath² [BUTT '14 ツ]♫♪♥™ 6 · 2 0

very nice like it

2007-05-17 18:47:41 · answer #9 · answered by marsh 7 · 2 0

awwww!how sad!oh his poor mother!!

2007-05-17 19:32:36 · answer #10 · answered by ....FED UP............ 7 · 1 0

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