Hey tell me if this is any good. Tips are wanted. Please be honest!!!
Verse 1:
Walking down the street last night
When I came across a girl
She was a real nutter
With hair out of this world
Yet she caught me by surprise
I couldn’t sleep that night
Cause I’m in over my head.
Yes, over my head.
Chorus:
And I’m singing
There’s this one girl
And she dominates my world
Beautiful long blonde hair
Any excuse to stare
I wish she could be mine
Oh all mine
Verse 2:
She’s a touch immature at times
But man is she rather fine
Nice Body, good personality
The whole package in one
Yes, I’d Stay up all night
Just to talk to her
(repeat chorus)
Verse 3:
I dream about that girl
Just wanna hold her everynight
Ye, I think about that lady
And I miss her all the time
I really love you baby
Will it ever be you and me?
(repeat chorus)
As this world comes to an end
I hope we are still friends
I’d hold your hand, sit next to you
You were the love of my life.
2007-05-17 01:09:40 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Other - Music