i know that there isn't a title but tell me what u think anyway
Looking in your eyes,
Seeing your smile,
Hearing your laugh,
Hoping for one last chance.
I know I’m not perfect,
I know I’ve done wrong,
I know that I might not deserve it,
But I need one last chance.
I still love you,
Still need you,
Still dream of being in your arms,
Still remember your kisses.
I know you’re mad,
I know you are disappointed,
I know I don’t deserve you’re forgiveness,
But I’m still hoping for one last chance.
2007-05-16 14:36:07 · 6 answers · asked by iANNA! 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It flows. You got your point across. Good job. My editor [BF]always tells me those two things are important. Hope it worked for you.
2007-05-16 14:42:04 · answer #1 · answered by sweet & sour 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Sounds like someone who is desperate and lonely
2007-05-16 21:40:26 · answer #2 · answered by bobbie b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought you were going to actually post a poem
2007-05-16 21:39:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
i like it =)
2007-05-16 21:39:38 · answer #4 · answered by P&S girlie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it...
2007-05-16 21:41:03 · answer #5 · answered by 90☮48 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good good
2007-05-16 21:39:07 · answer #6 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋