Bacon is salty,
Souse meat is too.
Yo hair is suh shiny,
I shore do like you.
When ye chew yer tabaccer,
Ye spit like a pro,
Im'a wantin' to date ye,
Maybe take ye to a picture show.
Ye Daddy he likes me,
My truck cranks most days,
Momma said I should ask ye,
If ye wanna see one those plays.
If'n ye ain't too busy,
An the corns in the gin,
Would ye go out wif me,
Or do ye wanna jist be friends?
2007-05-16 02:37:48 · 23 answers · asked by RoyDamnMercer 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
its almost as good as u are in bed LOL
2007-05-16 02:44:57 · answer #1 · answered by LOLLI 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Oh I like it especially the ending part <33
2007-05-16 09:43:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd been reading Tennyson a little while ago and I wasn't prepared for that "yo man" style. Anyway, it's nice. Not my style, though. I prefer Tennyson!
2007-05-16 11:36:06 · answer #3 · answered by Gleeky 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I do believe that's about the most romantical thang I ever heard. Hit's sa sweet.
2007-05-16 10:20:00 · answer #4 · answered by Ho 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
as a poet, I really like the dialogue! you incorporated a theme into your poem, and gave it individuality. Kudos :) it sounds great!
2007-05-16 09:42:02 · answer #5 · answered by smrt_blondie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aaawwwww....... shux.
Aint that just tha pertiest poem!
Thats the sweetest thang that I ever did hear.
2007-05-16 09:44:13 · answer #6 · answered by Jennifer G 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its not quite Chaucerian but it rhymes in places.
2007-05-16 09:42:40 · answer #7 · answered by Barbarian 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it rocks..However, I think you need to change the spelling of YE to YAH...it sounds more like you are saying ..."come to ye old tavern" Instead of .....well....yah or you could spell it ya. Y'all
2007-05-16 09:44:23 · answer #8 · answered by Renny 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it has a good rhyming pattern, are you planning to give that poem to someone? if you are make sure you spell you words correctly.
2007-05-16 09:43:19 · answer #9 · answered by Little Yellow 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dang gone!!that was just the purtiest thang i evr red!!haha!!
ILOVE YOU MAN!!!you make me laugh so much!!!
2007-05-16 11:34:05 · answer #10 · answered by ....FED UP............ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Folks its time for a hilbilly moment!!! HA HA HA!!! Good tho!!
2007-05-16 09:41:34 · answer #11 · answered by Lolla D 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋