Can you look at my text from a writing viewpoint?if you could rephrase it in a better English?

Question

I have try to translate (using freetranslation.com) from a different language into English but it didn't get me too far.

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Usually, the closed models, as the model of learning for individual domain of subject do not offer suitable spaces for the learning from the real problems or examples based on the local realities. They do not stimulate the active search and the manipulation of information of the most diverse natures and formats, disabling a significant learning (meaningful learning), in accordance with the imposed challenges by the society of information.

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Answer 1

Makes sense and looks fine to me.

Answer 2

Closed models, as learning models for individual subjects, do not usually offer the opportunity to learn from real problems or from examples based on local conditions. They do not stimulate active learning or the manipulation of different kinds of information. They therefore do not allow the kind of meaningful learning experience which is required to meet the challenges of today's information society.

This one's quite a bit harder because you should probably be using terminology that's recognised by experts in education. For example, I've used 'active learning', which is a recognised phrase (try typing 'define: active learning' into Google to see if I've hit the right concept).

Answer 3

The best way to learn is from real problems, from situations based upon realities. The method of learning called a 'closed model' does not stimulate active learning. This model fails to allow manipulation of information in different forms. Therefore, significant learning does not take place.

Answer 4

Closed models of mastering a subject usually do not offer adequate coverage of the real issues. They do not encourage active participation, which has a significant, negative impact on meaningful learning.

Answer 5

Perhaps this is what you seek:

"Closed models do not usually reflect real problems. They cannot emulate (copy) the open nature of searches or combine information in innovative ways."

Answer 6

I'll be honest here and say I didn't understand one word of it and I write short stories... Its complicated for me .. I wish you luck and hope that you know what you are talking about because i didn't have a notion... its like the instructions on the back of a diy pack... or something a doctor would say to you when he didn't know what was wrong with you.......sorry.. but i am only being honest

Answer 7

between the fundamental circumstances for the reform of the well being sector is the preparation and persevering with preparation of the well being experts. those human beings would desire to be arranged to stand the consistent modifications which accompany the speeded up technological and scientific advances of modern-day society. In that experience, the academic technique, in any respect ranges, integrating preparation, study and prepare, itself turns right into a strategic component.

Answer 8

sounds good to me

Answer 9

it is perfect