Opinions, well everyone has one right so please be informative and honest....I am in the process of writing a screenplay and figured why not use the power of the net to see where this is going for me, The script is about an ex untied states special forces soldier who leaves the army and goes back home to his family and finds out that his little brother has joined the military FLASH FORWARD...The younger brother prospers Triumphantly as a soldier and becomes part of the elite Army Ranger's FLASH FORWARD....The unit of Rangers are deployed to Iraq for the use of teams specialty recon...While behind enemy lines on a recon mission the unit is captured by band of Iraqi insurgents....FLASH FORWARD...The brother at home and family are informed of his capture, the family is optimistic in the safe return of thier son and brother....The insurgents broadcast live over the net the introduction to thier demands and intent for the captured soldiers. OUT OF ROOM let me know if you want to hear more..
2007-05-15 04:25:41 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Movies
to make it a little shorter for those I bore to death lol....the brother at home watches the broadcast and the insurgents kill the entire unit of Rangers, but the twist is durring the broadcast the brother noticed a certain trait about these men the insurgents that he remembers from his days in the military and using his prior military connections he finds a way to iraq to hunt down the killers of his brother...there is much more to it but again trying to keep it short...many characters are introduced in the script also involves alot of suspenful moments and action and I have yet to get there but maybe there will be a girl in the script..ya cant have a good one without a girl right but so far thats what I am working with so any comments are appreciated good or bad I accept all....Thank you all
2007-05-15 04:36:25 · update #1
Ok I do appreciate all the comments but to the last one I must say but apologize its not a one man army movie, I was trying to keep it short but there are more characters introduced and the do help with brothers actions....but thanks everyone...I doubt anything will ever come from it but its the joy of writing it, not all the money and watching it made into a movie lmao anyway thanks everyone...
2007-05-15 04:57:16 · update #2
I think that it sounds good. I would really like to hear more your work is brilliant but i think that you should add more twists, like i duno.... his brother isn't captured he is killed. There aint nothin better to watch than a good old revenge story or book. Or you could even have they find out that the brother is corrupt taking bribes etc. The one bit that i would change would be that it was on national TV. Not the net.
2007-05-15 05:34:54 · answer #1 · answered by LukeRoach 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I as an African American Female as well feel that women of our race get pleasure of criticising each other. I feel the same as you too, I don't understand why we have to fight each other and put each other down while other races are sticking together. I sometimes envy, the Hispanics the most because I see how they stick together and are so proud to represent their heritage. But then again it is hard to respect some of the other black women because some just don't want to act right, some don't want to respect one another. Some of its jealousy they feel against each other. I remember when I first entered high school, which is a predominantly black school, i was criticised by the way that I dressed, which was usually very modest and more businesslike and they knew that I came from a catholic school, so I guess they thought I was rich. But I just feel that it is jealousy against one another!
2016-05-18 21:27:37 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try explaining in it 1-2 sentences. No producer, or agent for that matter, will read all of that. Organize your thoughts and come up with an interesting logline. Don't give up--just organize your thoughts. Maybe you're not at a point where you should be sharing your thoughts yet. Give it time.
2007-05-18 13:56:43 · answer #3 · answered by sir_didymus24 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
One man army movies are just not done anymore. And set in Iraq with fake Muslim guys, I won't see it. But write it anyway, I appreciate a good effort any day.
2007-05-15 04:50:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really do like it, and it sounds really interesting and not boring at all, but would the people who captured his brother in iraq really put their killing them on the internet? maybe you could have the people who captured and killed them tape it, and send it to the u.s. military, or the familys of those they killed. to me, that would make a little more sense, becuase i just dont think that they would really put it on the internet.
2007-05-15 05:15:00 · answer #5 · answered by 12345 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh man where's the rest let it continue I was really getting into it alot and it just ends keep goin keep it going. You are a real talent. But add more to it :) I was enjoying myself. :)
2007-05-15 04:41:00 · answer #6 · answered by GypsyDaze 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I definitley want to hear more.I'm usually not into war stuff, but this kept me wantig more! Definitely good!!!
2007-05-15 04:29:53 · answer #7 · answered by nirvanapure1213 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
keep tryin it sounds interesting,but dont let to much out some one will steal your idea.remember kramers fragrance 'the ocean'.
2007-05-15 06:12:26 · answer #8 · answered by mike hunt 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good. I'd watch it. Keep it up!
2007-05-15 04:54:33 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good so far. i'd like to hear more.
good luck with your writing
2007-05-15 04:32:04 · answer #10 · answered by erica w 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋