Moments
Moments in time, moments which combine
Moments of ever changing design
Moments of gladness, moments of sadness
Moments when moments seem full of madness
Moments of peace, moments to release
Moments when moments seem never to cease
Moments for sharing, moments for caring
Moments that nobody knows that your there in
Moments to cry, moments to sigh
Moments you wish would go wuickly by
Moments of splendour, moments so tender
Moments with moments you want to remember
Moments to be giving. moments to be living
Moments when you feel you want to be forgiving
Moments to shake, moments to quake
Moments when moments seem hard to take
Moments to regret, moments to forget
Moments you wish hadn't happened yet
Moments to fear, moments that are clear
Moments when you wonder when someone is sincere
2007-05-15 01:11:21 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
moments of scorn, moments when your torn
Moments when a brave face needs to be worn
Moments of woe, moments to go
Moments when moments go painfully slow
Moments to bless, moments to confess
Moments when you wish the moments were less
Moments of bliss, moments you miss
Momets when wounds could be healed with a kiss
Moments of need, moments of greed
Moments from which you want to be freed
Moments to stay, moments to delay
Moments when feelings are hard to convey
Moments to cherish, moments of relish
Moments that hopefully will never perish
Moments that shine, moments so fine
Moments when life is like roses and wine
Moments of pleasure, moments to treasure
Moments you wish would go on forever
So as you journey through joy and strife
Remember moments make up your life
2007-05-15 01:18:44 · update #1
Quite good in fact, although it takes more than a moment to read it.
2007-05-15 01:19:13 · answer #1 · answered by cakes4southafrica 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good but gets a bit annoying with all the moments
2007-05-15 07:32:40 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
alright but to many moments
2007-05-15 01:20:11 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wish i hadnt wasted that moment reading it
2007-05-15 01:21:20 · answer #4 · answered by louie3 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry, but I think it's terrible. Keep trying, though. You might improve in time.
2007-05-15 01:26:20 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats good. maybe you should shorten it just a little bit.
2007-05-15 01:22:06 · answer #6 · answered by Milo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
okay
2007-05-15 01:14:22 · answer #7 · answered by TAT 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋