Being a young innocent girl working in houses are easy targets for being sexually abused. Domestic servitude for many girls means being faced with sexual abuse and among the most serious and frightening hazards with many toxins, chemicals, and hazardous agents.
2007-05-14 13:45:24 · 8 answers · asked by rapidshareyo 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgender
Say it like it is!!
2007-05-14 14:03:36 · answer #1 · answered by Jenni Butter 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Young, innocent girls working in private homes are easy targets for sexual abuse. They are also faced with the frightening hazards of toxins, chemicals and hazardous agents.
2007-05-14 21:23:43 · answer #2 · answered by Happy go Lucky 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First you need a theme: Is it this girl or is it for all young innocent women? It sounds like you are addressing the issue for all young women.
Many young women face the issue of sexual abuse working in private homes. Being innocent makes them easy targets for unscrupulous men.
That is not the only hazard they may face there is also the dangers of toxins, with the cleaning chemicals they must use to do the job the way the employer expects them to do it.
2007-05-14 20:56:43 · answer #3 · answered by Ruth 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It actually sounds very good as it is. If you're writing a paper, you're clearly talented as a writer.
Some suggestions may be helpful, but in general, these are matters of style, not grammatical rules. Here's how I would have written it:
"Any young, innocent girl working in private homes can become an easy target for sexual harassment or abuse. In addition, lower social standing forces domestic servants to endure the serious health risks presented by the hazardous chemicals and toxins contained in cleansers."
The style is to use as few versions of the verb "to be" as possible, to keep clauses that are related together and those that are less related separated, and to use as few words as possible. I added the harassment comment because abuse is simply the most severe form of objectification.
2007-05-14 21:04:10 · answer #4 · answered by NHBaritone 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your question is influenced by toxins, chemicals, and hazardous agents. Put down the gas can .
2007-05-14 20:52:32 · answer #5 · answered by JY. 4 · 3⤊ 2⤋
maybe you need a different job?
2007-05-14 21:00:24 · answer #6 · answered by AliBaba 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
so quit
2007-05-14 21:26:16 · answer #7 · answered by KRIS 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
What? Are you a perv?
2007-05-14 20:49:02 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 2⤋