Hi
can anyone correct my paragraph . it so important to me ,and i don't no alot about writing rules ,so can anyone help me ..
this is my writing
i live in Riyadh,and there ismy home.my lovely houes is in AL_Ulaya
neighberhood.For 20 years ilived there .it contains 2 floors the
upper one has 5 rooms,one of them is mine.
my room is so peaceful ,with the color of the spring .in the middel of
it there is a book cabinet with alot of different books.next to it there
is a dressing table .on it a small bottles of perfume and a different
kinds of make_up with a several colors . when i look out the window
i can see our back yard .it surronded with a beautiful flowers and
roeses.
no one could blame me if i love it .This Is my Houes
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ANY COMMENTS ? guys....
2007-05-14 03:00:58 · 5 answers · asked by lonely heart 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I live in Riyadh where my home is located. My lovely house is in the AL_Ulaya neighborhood where I have lived for 20 years. The house contains 2 floors. The upper floor has 5 rooms, one of them is mine.
My room is so peaceful. It is the color of spring. In the middle of the room is a bookcase containing many different books. Next to the bookcase there is a dressing table. On it there are small bottles of perfume and different kinds of make-up of various colors. When I look out the window I can see our back yard. It is surrounded with beautiful flowers, in particular, roses.
No one can blame me for loving it. This is my home.
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(I hope this helps.)
2007-05-14 03:27:42 · answer #1 · answered by Robert L 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I live in Riyadh. This is my lovely house in the AL_Ulaya neighborhood where I have lived for 20 years. It has 2 floors and the upper floor had 5 rooms. One of them is mine.
My room is so peaceful with the colors of spring. In the middle of the room there is a book cabinet with a lot of different types of books. Next to it there is a dressing table. On the dressing table is a small bottle of perfume and makeup in several different colors. When I look out the window in my room, I can see our backyard surrounded by many beautiful flowers including roses. How could anyone blame me for loving my house? After all, it is my home.
2007-05-14 04:26:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My home is in Riyadh in the Al Ulaya neighborhood. I've lived there for twenty years. There are two floors. The upper floor has five rooms, one of which is mine.
My room is so peaceful. It is the color of spring. In the middle of it there is a book cabinet with many different books. Next to it there is a dressing table with small bottles of perfume and different colors of makeup. When I look out the window I can see the backyard, which is surrounded with beautiful flowers and roses.
No one could blame me for loving it. This is my house.
2007-05-14 03:26:58 · answer #3 · answered by cupcake_the_dog 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My home is located in Ridayh. There are lovely houses in the Al-Ulaya neighborhood. I have lived there for 20 years. It contains two floors : the upper room has five rooms in which one belongs to me.
My room is very peaceful with spring colors in it. In the middle of my room,there is a book cabinet with plenty of books and a dressing table beside it. On the dressing table, there are small bottles of perfume and different kinds and colors of makeup. When I look out the window, I can see our backyard, surrounded by roses and other beautiful flowers. No one could blame me if I love my house.
2007-05-14 03:17:15 · answer #4 · answered by Dave aka Spider Monkey 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ALOT OF MISTAKES!!!!! WHERE ARE YOU FROM?
2007-05-14 03:17:09 · answer #5 · answered by Jenna 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋