Walk slowly
Eyes twinkling
Heart Beating
Hands Bleeding
You don't know what you'll do
Blinded by rage
Open your locker
Take out your books
He comes over
You scream
He screams
Its all a blur
Silence
Serenity
Standing over what's left
A heart
And yesterday's math homework
2007-05-11 12:33:25 · 11 answers · asked by !~CoNvErSe~! 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
What age are you? Look, life isn't all deep moments and feelings. I spent 12 years as an undercover operative for a European government. You tend to grow up fast. Believe me. I have buried more people I love than I can imagine. But this yacht and crew tend to make up for it...but not if my real name ever got out.
2007-05-11 12:39:38 · answer #1 · answered by Teacher 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Thats pretty good you have a talent for writing you shoulld get it published
2007-05-11 19:37:09 · answer #2 · answered by bublegumlvr3 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
sounds like you are having a hard time getting over some smelly d*** boy.
2007-05-11 19:41:23 · answer #3 · answered by denise 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's good. Your ending is wonderful!
2007-05-11 19:37:32 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
requiem for VA TECH?
2007-05-11 19:36:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
very good you have talent
2007-05-11 19:38:09 · answer #6 · answered by Tammy K 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it. the last line is cool!=)
2007-05-11 19:38:08 · answer #7 · answered by bhalas 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very goodddddddddddd
2007-05-11 19:35:56 · answer #8 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
pretty good
2007-05-11 19:50:31 · answer #9 · answered by someone 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it!!!^_^ goes good when ur listening to the worm and the bird from the used..??? idk i was listening to it while i read this...lol
2007-05-11 19:37:21 · answer #10 · answered by cowsmoo10 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋